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Midnight Dance

Crickets sing a night song
lightning bugs speckle the ground
the moon casts its shadow
I do a midnight dance

Peepers sing a melodious song
Stars create pictures of light in the sky
The moon is my spotlight
I do a midnight dance

Hush

The sun peeps over the mountains
Blanketing the world in light
The night songs have stopped
I no longer do a midnight dance

Author notes

This really didn't have to do with the prompt, I'm sorry

You can disqualify me if you wish, but I do believe I like this poem

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Comments


  • Mrs. Moretti
    July 28, 2008
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    Be-a-utiful.


  • zillion
    July 16, 2008

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    I rarely if ever DQ people when it comes to prompt contests. I mean, where ever a word or quote or whatever takes you business or mine. I'm just the reader. The spectator if you will.