I delve beneath it all
there you endure
Passion without remorse
An apparition;
Mirrored fragments
Remorse has no calling
for this is what I bestow upon myself
Author notes
credit pic : GreenHrtPaleMoon
A contest entry
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Comments
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I like this but it had a slite feel that it was repeating its self. but.. that could be me.
A wonderful write and I wish you Wonderful ideas for the future.
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A darker take. I like! 'delve', 'apparition', 'fragments', such good word choices. Best of luck!
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