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Sadistic Eroticism

Within myself I crumble
    Falling
          to
            the floor


Within yourself
      You strengthen


Devouring me; enveloping me

I tremble
      As I wait


          For you to take from me

All that I am
              worth

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 15, 2008

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    This is a very unique take on the picture! I can see the box as a metaphor for her worth which may be taken! Really liked the write!