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time and a place

there comes a time and a place
to act like a fool
usually at a delusional bar, club
penetrating beat
sound of a man dieing
a woman screaming for life
scremo
drums and base
played out by lead guitar
jumping historically
zooming in and out
with laughter
dizzy from lack of water
dehydrated
strobe light
out of fashion
rock scene
died hair
colours flashing
take cover
bathroom stall used
I'll try the guys washroom
there comes a time tap water seem appropriate
to indulge in
sip after sip
men stair with judgement
kiss my ass
get away purvey
pass the toilet paper
jenny locks the door
Rose and Tina steal the stalls
sometimes its necessary to pee in a sink
i see jenny think she can squat in a urinal
urinal is like a sink
perhaps
just laugh
just dance
girl night out

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