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Post-Production

See me
I'm afraid of the plain
So much like you
On a cinema frame

Your magazine cover
Your fabricated idol
Grind my bones
Make me so beautiful

The plastic skin
Upon my face
Is myself mocking
Your natural grace

Be me man
Or be I lass
Pap my skin
And powder my ass

I'm on your TV
In your awful movies
Such a fake
Such a liar
Such a convincing actor
In your music
In your prose
Such a cute, little disaster

I can't stand myself
I can't live with myself
I hate myself
I HATE MYSELF

A thin little body
Earned or of liposuction
Is so unimportant
After post-production

Author notes

Ah... this poem is frustrating me so much.
I don't think it is done, but... well, its getting somewhere...

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    July 14, 2008

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    its definitely getting some where love the flow..and enjoyed the ending part the most



    Cindy