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Swept Floors

Capital punishment
Good? Maybe
Depends on how you look.

Me, I like to think of this
As
Sweeping the floors and nooks

You lose all the dust
As it’s
Aesthetically displeasing

But what of that earring
That was
Dropped into the mess surrounding

Is it worth making things look good
At any cost
Is it worth that gemstone

That is for you to decide.
These are merely
The idle thoughts I own

Author notes

I was trying a different rhyming pattern.
I don't think it worked.
Your thoughts?

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