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emotions suck

she said never let go
but than pushed him away
begged him to leave
but asked him to stay
said she loved him
but her actions said no
asked him to hold on
but told him to let go

and she wonders why her life is such a mess,
all her sins she never wants to confess
shes confused and always wonders why
does she insist on always saying goodbye?

Author notes

i know your going to read into this
you really shouldnt tho
im ok and not going to kill myself
but i miss you like crazy
im sorry i suck as a person

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  • Zeal
    July 15, 2008

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    once again good write. I'm sure whoever you wrote this to doesn't think you suck at all and even though you hurt them and pushed them away they knew all along that you still cared for them and if they could say anything to you it would be that they miss you like crazy to. Well whoever this is to I hope that you and him find some way to make things better. Keep up the good writing.