all night all i could see
was her eyes upon me
she approached me so smoothly
and she knew that she had me
trapped under her sweet spell
intoxicated by her smell
she grabbed my hips
then kissed my lips
the taste was appealing
gave me a tingly feeling
Author notes
Seems like it needs more but here it is anyway hope you enjoy it.
A contest entry
- sensual quickie by amid unnaked things.
420 points, ended August 13, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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a lovely poem, and i like the way it rhymes
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me liking this one, u write so beautifully, im so envious of ya hon...
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this is awesome!!!
i loved it great poem!! so short but has so much menaing to it. keep up the good work
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Oh, the life of a lesbien. It is hard at points, but they at least can have their own love, and hopefully not be judged and if they are, screw those people who judge. Very nice write, I really loved this short poem. Keep on writing.
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Is a very awesome poem. I like the way you write!
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Good writing here. I like the imagery too. It is powerful. Keep writing. And good luck in the contest.
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Wishes
Wayne Leon
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yea i think it needed a bit more, like you left off to soon. However i like, it made me think of Katy's song, an alas me and my relationship wit gurls. Nice. Haha the taste was appealing. Haha i like this alot.
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I like this! Very sensual! She grabbed my hips then kissed my lips
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I LIKED IT!
Nice work again. Good style of rhymes and a romantic feel to it! GOOD JOB!
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