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Letters

Envelopes stacked upon the table,

vaporized by sobbing wind,

dream calligraphy was penned inside,

ink vanishing in fireplace of lies.

 

Letter lips wrote, but never mailed

were lockets worn,

keys to places draped in nuptial white.

 

They all disappeared,

parchments stolen by fingers that once penned with caresses,

leaving only silence as knives, which never cease stabbing,

questions burning as hot coals, scorching for lack of answering.

 

Falling into abyss of ashen ink stains, heart mummified,

correspondence scripted again of alphabet in acrid hues,

memo crafted as eulogy epistle,

including address to graveyard where castle once existed

knight owner turning mortician just as all the others.

 

Sending dispatch to world with the same hope

as for a message for rescue placed in a prescription bottle

tossed on tides of tears

feeling utterly discarded on desert isle in middle of concrete sea.

Author notes

Prompt:
And once again it has been proven that she doesn't deserve to find a home. Once again, she realizes that everyone will leave her alone.

It's just another part of history repeating itself, laying her heart bare against cold stone. It's just another punishment earned for misdeeds she needs to atone.

And while her soul is ruptured and left bleeding out into the snow, she once again realizes that her heart is just another worthless piece of fake gold.

How could anyone so rotten deserve a loving home?

Everybody leaves.

~Rose Dark Thorn

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  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    July 22, 2008

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    Heart wrenching and beautiful, your words whisper poetical brilliance whenever I am granted to read them. Thank you for entering.


  • maralisa silver member
    July 15, 2008

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    vaporized by sobbing wind,dream calligraphy was penned inside,ink vanishing in fireplace of lies.as for a message for rescue placed in a prescription bottle
    tossed on tides of tears feeling utterly discarded on desert isle in middle of concrete sea.a truely wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contest


  • StarEyes
    July 14, 2008

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    What a wonderful take on the prompt! I love the way you used letters in this one... Makes one stop and think. Great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 14, 2008
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    awww good luck papa, tell me when you are done or soemthing