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Escape

Creative light of mind,
escape this prison of reason.
Break the ordered bars
with art.

A contest entry

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  • Lamia
    July 15, 2008

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    Cool poem and to the point which was the idea of the contest from what I've gathered. I'm not the first to comment ...oh well haha. Great poem and congrats on the trophy

  • Judith Chandler
    July 14, 2008

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    Nice write, exactly 15 words which you managed to arrange into an orderly statement, a comment on reason and art.