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The Heartbeats and Breathing

I walk in a wonderland of life.
I can see all the people's smiles,
even amongst the strife.
There's beauty in living.
It's about focusing on the laughter,
even when you can hear the crying.
Because if you can't see the life,
then you're only seeing dying.
Watch the eyes of children,
it seems they truly know.
When you still don't know everything,
there's still room to grow.
Examine the way a heart beats.
Listen to it's determination.
Just someone's breathing says
life is a celebration.

There's always something good.
There's always something true.
There's always a reason for living.
There's always you.

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  • BluesMan gold member
    July 16, 2008
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    Such an uplifting and sweet poem you have here Thank you for entering my contest


  • blueyez
    July 16, 2008
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    This is a sweet write full of inspiration.
    Peace and Love