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Night time thoughts

Was that a step behind you
And that, the creaking floor?
The darks that seems to blind you
And close the squeaking door

The noises in the night-time
The movements not quite seen
It never is the right time
The slate is not quite clean

Each little sound can scare you
And take your breath away
I really want to dare you
To face your death today!


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just playing with some multiple rhymes

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  • Thomas Scott gold member
    July 14
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    Just in case

    anybody was feeling really good today.
    If this wasn't so well done I think I'd hate it.


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    July 14

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    You're just trying to frighten me before I go to bed and turn out the light...you're not a very nice man