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Pure Power and Might

Horses
Pure power and might
Horses
They look like light
Horses
Thundering in herds
Horses
Flying over fields like birds
Horses
Forgiving and bright
Horses
Pure power and might

I live to ride them
On top of their back
To feel that power
And never go back

I live to love them
Without a doubt
And them loving back
Is what love is about

Horses
black and white
Horses
They are day and night
Horses
We can't copy their might
Horses
Pure power and might

Author notes

MUSTANG

thank you for letting me enter this contest and write a poem about the horses I love

This poem may not be the best, but it is the way I feel about horses and I will forever miss MAJ, a foal that had a special place in my heart, but died when she was just seven months old

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  • angels of the night silver member
    July 15, 2008

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    thisw is a very strong POEM indeed!! well write and preformed in writin keep up the gooooood WORK!!!!

    good luck in my contest!


  • Nature Song silver member
    July 14, 2008

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    Thank you for entering our contest. Your poem really struck me as unique and very original...My daughter Veronica is hosting this contest, her fist with my help. This poem was full of imagery and good flow. Best of luck to you! ~Sie