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Two persons

It’s like two persons

Living together

One is still smiling cherishing this world

Dancing freely among the spaces of colorful dreams

Searching joys, new wishes, new things to play with, to keep

And this second one

So full of uncertainty

Weak emotions hidden a bit

So easy to go down with them

And forget

Your name and all meanings

So easy to destroy

The mood of glory and smile

How is that?

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  • individuality gold member
    July 14, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry, we are more than just one shadow of ourselves - we are many, diving in and out of life and love.