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I Love You More Than....

I love you more than the moon and back,
You're the love of my life, that's a fact.
My heart is full of love for you,
Tell me that you love me too.
When I'm around you I acn be myself,
I always act so different around anyone else.
Baby I love you more that numbers can go.
That's a lot in case you didn't know.
I love you morethan the whole entire world,
All I want to do is be your girl.
There's one thing I hope to accomplish in life,
One day I hope you can call me your wife.
We belong together you know it's true.
Whenever I'm not with you I feel so blue.
But what is it that makes me love you so,
Oh who cares as long as you don't go.
I love you more than the stars in the sky,
Each one is like a twinkle in your eye.
I love you more than, well what else can be said?
I love you more than everything, shall it remain in my head?

Author notes

i choose option one because when I'm with him i really am happy. I could have done the last option and wrote about the love i lost but I would rather talk about the present and what makes me happy not about what makes me sad and He makes me happy

~*Princess Cuddle Bug*~

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    May 17

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    very cute. thank you for entering this into the contest for jordyn and i wish you the best of luck. viyanna rosemarie


  • Darkest Lover
    November 24, 2008

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    Very Nice Write
    I can feel all lthe emotion from it
    And how its all written is ver well accomplished

    Thank you and good luck


  • Shimano
    October 6, 2008
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    Good style of writing,your poem flows with such simple meaning but its so effective