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~Painful Reminders~

Raindrops of pain dust broken eyes,
betraying emotions, reveling venerability.
Cloaked in black invisible, mourning satisfaction

releasing pain through pores of evaporation.
Crimson lips set afire, revel our last kiss,
butterflies whisk past on gentle breezes,
your warmth still lingers.  

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option three
30-40 words
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  • AngelKat42
    July 14, 2008

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    this poem is beautiful with some sadness also. I liked this poem so much that I have read it 4 times already. I just sat here reading it and re reading it..your words paint a picture of their own, with a poem such as this you don't need the picture there.

    excellent take on the prompt

    good luck

    kat


  • creationsfromheart
    July 14, 2008
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    this is beautiful yet sad but wonderful


  • Luckintheshadows
    July 14, 2008

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    WOW...even without the picture the imagery of your poem is superb!!! I love the emotion of your words,
    thanks for sharing, and all the best in the contest,
    Luck.


  • Angels hero
    July 14, 2008

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    Very nice

    Your words of passion are very well put.


  • luna-midnight silver member
    July 14, 2008

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    wow, this is amazing, and well i enjoyed reading it so much i shall read once again, keep it up and good luck in the contest
    and see you can have some fun while working,
    stephanie ♥

  • luna-midnight silver member
    July 14, 2008
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    good luck

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