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When Not Is Knot

Feeling so blew as the wind blue through
nothing to dew but watch the morning do.
Waiting for sun's raise to rays in the sky,
try to by time till the shadows pass buy.

Still in a days from daze when you cared ,
mind can not bare as thoughts are beared.
Over mountain peeks, peaks the sunrise,
mid all the size as sunrise grows in sighs.

Hear in the silence I here saddness again,
reign now falls  from God's heavenly rain.
A tear falls from my I as eye think of you.
knew day brings pain of love I once new.


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Contest...
Mix words to make a humorous poem
my dog dyed while I died my shoes black
ham hoagie sub on whole wheat bred, as I bread my mare
with a donkey...


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  • VeritasLiberte
    July 25

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    You are so clever Sandy! At first, I thought you were having trouble with ILLITERACY! But then I realized this is a contest entry, and it's SUPPOSED to be that way! Well done! You shoulda got GOLD!


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 25
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      You make me laugh Thank for the nice comment. I guess it would sound a little confusing. Bless You, Sandy
  • Clovis6790Curious silver member
    July 17

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    I love your play on words in this poem. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this humorous write.


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 26
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      Great Coment

      Yes this was a fun contest to write for. Thank you for stopping by and reading. I appreciate your comment. You take care. Sandy

  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    July 14

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    How cute! Not what I was expecting; this is funny and unique, I love the play with words perfectly done!

    Best of luck hun
    ♥
    Stay safe
    Love to you
    ~Manda


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 16
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      Wonderful Coment

      Thsnk you Amanda, Always a pleasure to have you read my poetry. Hugs and Smiles dear.

      Love ya,
      Sandy

  • MoonsShadow gold member
    July 14

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    this is so what I like!!!

    Very funny imiges flow through my mind as I read this
    you did a great job in thinking this threw to make it rhyme as well
    thank you for this entry..good luck
    Lin


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 16
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      Thank you for the nice comment. You take care.

      Bless You,
      Sandy
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