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What parents can do!!!!

On the ridge of a lonely town
There was a boy with a constant frown
He tried to get along with friends
Yet he didn't know how to tie the ends

He stayed alone all night as they screamed
His parents were ruthless as it seemed
They often said words he didn't like
Whenever they argued he'd just ride his bike

He lay in his bed thinking of why
They could bicker this much and not eye for an eye
He hoped it would stop but still it did not
He felt insecure he felt like a dot
He'd like to talk loud but scared of them both
they'd hit him and beat him hindering his growth

Later in life it seem to come through
those feelings inside whatever few
they'd turn into instincts and use it by violence
But every once in life he'll be left within his  silence
With no one to love and no one loving him
Hell hurt himself more before life becomes grim!!!

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  • ChantelStone
    July 24, 2008
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    morbidly deep

    flipping well written but hellish sad... damn youre good


  • WhiteAngelCake
    July 16, 2008
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    I wouldn't want my parents to fight either. Good luck in the contest.

    -WhiteAngelCake


  • Nothing But No
    July 15, 2008
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    The background makes this hard to read, but the message is strong! Thank you for sharing.


  • XxX-Ivy-Love-XxX
    July 15, 2008
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    aww this is great! i like! nice nice work