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For my Friend

You say you're alone but im right here,
call me and and ill calm your fear,
when your heart is set on the edge of despair,
just remember i'll always care,
for your safety and your life,
i know its hard,
trudging throught the pain and the strife,
i never once in my life,
met a person quite like you,
who made me care the way i do,
we hardely speak,
and barely know,
but im always here,
let your emotions show,
because im always here to lend a hand,
when the time is ticking away like sand,
remember this my newest friend,
call on me im your safety until the end.

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is for you Rehan

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  • sOuL
    July 14, 2008

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    This is a very good poem, i like it. I am looking for myu soulmate not a friend though i like this poem. Great job done..take care


    • SaviDropKick.Oi.
      July 14, 2008
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      oo my bad i didnt know...well if oyu change the contest i could rewrite it for you! im sure i could do a good job but if you dont want to go to that much trouble its fine


  • Darkwell
    July 14, 2008
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    this was beautiful WOW