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Don't Be True

Dream, don't come true,
I can live without you.
That ending I don't need,
And so I plead:
Dream, please don't come true.

Author notes

Ever woke up from a dream that was a little too real, so it ends up bugging you all day long? I had one of those last night.

A contest entry

God Bless You!

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  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    July 28, 2008

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    this was cool good luck to you in the contest with the other poetry players

    mrs lady enthralling


  • CassidyEngle
    July 22, 2008
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    Too short, and it ad no umph. If you know what i mean