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He Makes Me Melt

The way the light shines in your eyes when you look at me
As do settles in your hair making it gleam
Your body melts in to mine
Your lips so cold so soft to the touch

Rich red wine fills my glass
The moon hung in the sky
The night is beautiful, perfect
Alive with love

My heart swells with feelings
I simply cannot put into words
You lean in, we touch
I melt 

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  • silverscent gold member
    July 18, 2008
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    This made me all goose pimplely. The true words and imagery of love. Thanks for entering.