Thousands of tears race down her face
Trying to avoid her shaking hands
That are furiously trying to wipe them away,
Trying to erase the pain
Her body shakes with such intensity
With every sob
That she can only sit,
And hope to get through it
Her small frame gently rocks back and forth
As she holds herself close,
Desperate to not break again,
Desperate not to let anyone know
Her long hair meant to hide her face,
Stuck to the places where the tears had been
Further proving that it's all real,
That it's not going to disappear
She's trying not to break further,
Trying not to show her pain,
Trying not to be found out,
Trying to break free of the hell she's in
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A highly emotional piece, highly descriptive through the use of the terminology within and the stanzas are in perfect order, and the concept of it is saddening and the last line is just superb to conclude it. Great write!
~Emily~ xx
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Wow, I like the last line, ties the whole piece together!
Really good piece!
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