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Thankyou

Something has changed
Inside of me
Something i thought
Could never be
Hurtful words,pain inside
A roller coaster in my mind
Its hard to explain
And i know you dont care
But, this i must share
I have to thankyou
For making me want to die
I thankyou
For not letting me down gently,
When you broke my heart
And made me cry
Thankyou , friend
For making me feel guilty,
For loving you
And feeling the way that i do
Again, i thankyou,
For cutting deep,
Into what was once my heart
And making the blood,
Falling from my arms start
I want you to know
That you achieved your goal
Now i am immortal
I have learned to live without the heart you stole
One last time, i must thank you
Because u are a great friend
You taught me that
No ones heart will i be able to mend
Forevermore alone. shall i be
And i hope that now you are happy

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  • XXxXBassMeisterxXxX
    July 1

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    very emotional, but nice job! I especially like the lines "hurtful words, pain inside, a roller coaster in my mind". Nice write, thanks for sharing!


    I stole this comment from xXxicequeenxXx to be fair. great write.


  • Hebz
    June 20

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    this reminds me of a poem i wrote, but never published

    Well Done, Poet

    Thnx for entering & Best of Luck

    GloriousGift
    Hebz


  • Temptation.
    January 28
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    i like this alot!!! thanks for entering and good luck


  • Shannon62875
    January 26

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    AMAZING!!! I can feel how sad you are and how much this person has hurt you.. im really sorry.. i know exactly how that feels.. i hope things get better for you.. keep up the amazing work and good luck in my contest!

    Shannon*Leah

  • iLoveSongs
    January 9
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    that was welll goood so emotional, where do u get them skills!


  • xXxIceQueenxXx
    July 14, 2008

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    very emotional, but nice job! I especially like the lines "hurtful words, pain inside, a roller coaster in my mind". Nice write, thanks for sharing!

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