I once was afraid of something I never had
Then when it came to me I was beyond sad
I couldnt stand the thought of feeling this
It's like I knew years before there would be no bliss
I had a fear of falling in love and it was right
Because when I fell I fell hard each and every night
Suddenly my dreams became a nightmare so vivid
That when I fell for you in the future I was livid
I knew it would happen if I gave my heart out
When I was young I was naive and there was doubt
But the doubt was something I should have listened to
Because everything I hoped wouldnt happen came true
I was left alone and hurt by each and every love
Now I only have me when push comes to shove
You dont need a person to make you feel valid
Life doesnt have to be about a love ballad
You can make your own happiness if you succeed
Remember being in love isnt something you need
Just be yourself and be true to who you are
And in this life you will have the chance to go far
If you choose to love someone love them, but with care
Because you dont want to worry about them not being there
Author notes
yeah i dont know just some thoughts not a good poem
What did you think
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wow ... you just wrote the story of my life ... I didn't know that you knew me that well
hehe .. but seriously .. great write, and I can reflect upon this on so many levels. I have loved and been loved before, now i'm on a break from it all. It still hurts not loving someone close, but sometimes it hurts loving someone that you don't want to love. Like they say, "Be patient, love will come to you", this is the new approach I am trying to stick with. Overall, this is a great write, I enjoyed it! 
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The funny thing is im trying to do the same thing and wait and be patient. I realize i dont need love to be happy, but if i find the right kind of love then i wont let that go. I just hope I am ready for it.
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It really takes strength for someone to go it alone, and realise that they don't need to be in a relationship all the time. Love can be costly, with the payments in instalments. A good write
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couple typos...hear instead of heart, and too, instead of to, but I like your ideas here. Nice stream of consciousness kind of feel for me, which is one of the forms I started in when I began to write. Interesting thoughts! Thanks for your comments too!
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I think that this is really good. Love is a fickle thing. Its great when you're in love with the right person. But with the wrong person, its a living hell. Thanks for sharing and keep it up.
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