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Winter

Bathtubs
Mountain
High

Fill
With
Snow

Melt
In
Spring

Deluge
World
Below

Author notes

Written in Myrtle Edwards Park on 11/23/2007. This poem was inspired by a mountain view.

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  • Eusebius
    August 20
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    Short, yes, but very neat and very nifty stuff here, quite well executed in but a few lines.... bravo... bravo...


  • Sensuity
    July 14
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    Short sweet and spicy, it loved the idea of short lines, was a pleasure to read, Keep it up.