I clicked upon this contest and I saw you there,
I instantly felt your sadness and I am more than aware.
Tell me are you willing to listen for I will speak the truth,
for I have decided my only child in life that child is you.
I don't sugar coat how I care for someone you see,
I am a great listener so please come talk to me.
I am a nut at times and we just might have some fun,
cause often life does at time seems to take away the sun.
So come on now tell me whats wrong ,
together we shall solve this problem so we can move on.
I am here every day so I will be watching and your poems I shall read,
for a friend to help as I want to help you indeed .
You aren't the only lonely person for I too have my days,
and I want us to be friends and care enough to find a way.
Just click on my user-name its storiesuntold and see,
how much I care all along for you see that's just me.
Author notes
I am here every day and you can talk to me about anything anything at all and we shall see you feeling the care you so deserve Love Patty
A contest entry
- Seeking for someone who will care about me by sOuL.
499 points, ended July 24, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awwwwwh *hugs everyone in the room*
sorry i'm tooooo emotional -
Wow, that was a really good poem! I'm glad that even though you're a complete stranger, you're willing to listen to other people's problems.
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oh my goodness! what a wonderful poem! It shows what a wonderful, loving, caring person you are, not to mention, a very fine poet!
I read this out loud to Dad (Slayer) he agrees with me in all of this.
Thank you for sharing it with us all.
SJ
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Sometimes strangers can be the kindest souls. This is a very sweet poem. Great rhyme and flow. Great luck to you in the contest!
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A friend or an angel
no i wont decide or describe..
This poem is really a good one
and i like it so much
your inner meaning is great
Thanks for writing this for me and good luck in the contest
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I am a nut at times and we just might have some fun,
cause often life does at time seems to take away the sun. wonderful poem my friend so sincere and deep this lady has a heart of bloosoming gold
good luck in the contest my friend
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I can vouch for this lady as a truly caring person who knows how to listen.
Nice write too. Good luck.
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Hello Storiesuntold. This is, obviously, a very caring write, and your desire to help others is commendable. I hope it helps the person you wrote it for. My regards.
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