Through the pain of centuries,
A soul must wander alone
To find the one thing that it is searching for.
It is not love that it looks for,
Because many offer it up just to snatch it away
In the blink of an eye.
The spirit that which seeks affection
Can always find it in those
Who truly care for them.
One searches for someone to care for them
Because without care,
Love is an empty shell.
Stay close to the truest of friends
And affection is easy to find
And love comes slowly in the process.
Author notes
This is for Rehan! I'm always here if you need to talk.
A contest entry
- Seeking for someone who will care about me by sOuL.
499 points, ended July 24, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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Very good poem
and very good inner meaning
i like this one
thanks for entering my contest
take care
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You have said it very well; affection is more lasting than love and more dependable. "Many offer it [love] just to snatch it away."
Good luck.
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I like this take on the search for love. It's refreshing and those last few lines are some of the best I've read. You have wondeful insight. Great write and best of luck. -R.T

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Thank you very much! I really appreciate that!
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