It's all I see...
It's all I need...
When I'm with you...
Being held close...
All that exists...
Is the two of us.
Everyone else...
Just disappears...
Into a cover of smoke...
Filled with tears.
I listen to you speak...
So softly...
I can barely hear...
The whispers floating to me.
The sweet things...
you always say...
To make my fears...
Go away.
The light around us...
Seems so dim...
Compared to the glimmer...
Shining in your eyes.
You hold me tight...
As if to never let go..
And all that exists...
Is just the two of us.
Author notes
I don't really know what to say about this. I was just sitting here thinking about the guy I'm in love with, and the words just popped into my head.
A contest entry
- Love prompt by Shifting.
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Comments
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Very pretty. I liked it, but perhaps it was a bit too tame. I like to see more passion. More energy before the floating. Still it was good. Just not quite what I am looking for when I say I want something I can relate to. Thank you for entering. Patti
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Wow!
this is simply cute and lovely I really enjoyed reading this the love in this poem just hit me like wow I feel like that way about my lover :] thanks for shring and best wishes in the contest good luck
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this is so simple and lovely. This sums up what I feel when I'm with the one I love.
Thanks for entering
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OMG!!!!
Dude... this explains how every girl feels about a guy they are truly in love with... you and me both feel this way about someone... keep this up... seriously.
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Excellent and such love shines through
Oh what a lovely feeling for sure there is none like it in the world . You have let your heart write this piece indeed .Lovely
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.....WOW>
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AWESOME
I wuv it!!! me likeys alot
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