I worry way too much.
So much that it
interferes
with us.
[My worries must lesson]
I like to play the game
where I pretend I'm okay,
and then explode
with emotion.
[At the worst possible moments]
And she wont admit it,
but my fears,
and worries,
are ruining it.
[I'm ruining this]
All I want,
is for this to be okay,
and for her to notice me,
as much as I notice her.
[But what can I do]
Distance and time
have become
my two worst enemies,
both working together
to defeat me.
[I will not be defeated]
I will stand tall,
and regain my dignity,
and my strength,
because I need to be strong.
[I must be strong.]
She deserves better,
doesn't need my worries.
[I LOVE HER]
Author notes
This isn't very good, once again, but it's true and it's me, so all is good.
A contest entry
- PREWRITTEN POEMS!!!!! by kavi22.
450 points, ended August 5, 2008, 137 entries
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Comments
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I really enjoyed this poem but the lines after every stanza were kind of distracting but thats just me. Thanks for enterng
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Interesting. I'm assuming this is about you and your girlfriend and perhaps a refrence to hockey in the beginning? I worry way to much for my own good. I think we all do...I love how you said distance and time are your worst enemies. A very personal and relational write. I feel like you ripped this straight from your diary and posted it. AMAZING WRITE!
Waremest,
Mylee -
very intriguing.
cool iam the first to comment on this poem!!! well any ways... i like this poem alot because i am a sucker for love poems like this. that is why i write so many of them. i totally love this one. keep it up!!!
love
molly.
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