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Sacrifice

Hope renewed, joyful tears flowed.
Fear would not over shadow
a Father’s gift of life promised,
for his only child, one Kidney.

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  • Redeemed15
    August 26, 2008
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    Wow. Deep poem Thanks for entering.


  • wildfiredreamer
    July 28, 2008
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    What a wonderful tale of a precious gift
    congratulation on your silver


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    July 28, 2008
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    this was good i enjoyed this thanks for entering good luck in the contest

    Mrs enthralling