Hope renewed, joyful tears flowed.
Fear would not over shadow
a Father’s gift of life promised,
for his only child, one Kidney.
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A contest entry
- 22 Words by Mrs LadyEnthralling.
700 points, ended July 28, 2008, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow. Deep poem Thanks for entering.
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What a wonderful tale of a precious gift
congratulation on your silver

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this was good i enjoyed this thanks for entering good luck in the contest

Mrs enthralling




