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Paint the Town

Hazy humid heat
I stumble belligerent
Through the streets
With a foul, deathly scent

I seemed to have lost track
Under constant attack
From this monkey on my back
I paint the town black

People see red
And elephants pink
While vampires see dead
After a little to drink

But for some reason
A lost of cohesion
Right from the start
Has made me see dark

Am I so cursed
It’s just getting worse
My mind and body fight
As God tilts the earth on me tonight

Maybe this is a warning
A mark of damnation
Of forthcoming mourning
To this insignificant creation

Now people start running
I say don’t bother
This deserves another
So keep the rounds coming

Sudden blur of motion
Drowned, sedated cries
Catering to a nameless notion
As bodies drop like flies

A glimpse, a stutter, a flash
Distorted and vague, this movie reel
Sensory overload and crash
That seems so surreal

Slowly I rise
I can only surmise

What just happened tonight

A sudden ambush attack
Maybe it was all in my head
But I no longer see black
Strangely everyone’s dead

Wearily I amble out of sight

I paint the town red

Author notes

my own take on the 'ole saying'.

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Comments


  • samm
    July 16, 2008
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    it was definitely worth the read :]
    also i really enjoyed your quotes


  • Tattboyspet
    July 14, 2008

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    'Of forthcoming mourning
    To this insignificant creation'
    ~frown~

    well well well ... painting the town red huh? DAMN Mister - this was REALLY intense and well done! loved every word of it!!!
    WELL BLOODY DONE!@!!!!!!