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As life continues; and

our world keeps revolving,

evolving, doing

what it does


Poetry remains

the silveriest lining

I ever did see.


One must write as if

it is the only luxury

or freedom you've ever known.


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  • poet2angels gold member
    July 22, 2008
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    Wonderful thoughts!
    TY for entering

    Lynda


  • desert places
    July 14, 2008
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    Wonderful

    First stanza is bounding with meaning and wonderful word choices that play on each other.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    July 14, 2008

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    IS THERE ANYTHING BETTER?

    NOT EVEN CHOCOLATE CAKELaughing

    BEAUTIFUL TRUTH.

    WRITTEN OH SO LOVELY

    GOD BLESS...