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Holding On

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I am floating within

my dreams of contentment

and all the while you watch over me,

my fantasies entwined

deep within your bones.

 

My illusions suckle

on your tender sighs,

that drift along tides

of what seems immortality.

 

I hold your soul

safe within my keeping

and dreamily strum

your heartstrings.

 

For you are the ebb to my flow,

the ocean I follow to your horizon

and within my eternal repose

you will forever abide.

 

 

 

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  • GreenHrtPaleMoon gold member
    July 14

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    I love the word 'heartstrings' and your use of it is wondrous. This piece is sweepingly beautiful. I felt I was drifting along a current of poetry, this piece just flows so well.

    "My illusions suckle

    on your tender sighs,

    that drift along tides

    of what seems immortality."

    MY favorite stanza. The way it almost feels like an infant struck a cord within me. Beautiful, just beautiful.


  • The Poetic Angel gold member
    July 14
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    butiful mum

    xxx judie xxx