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How Many Mountains?

Have you ever wondered what hell was like,
could it be here on earth?
Where people lie and take your very soul,
make you feel you have no worth.

Bring you nothing but tears through deceit,
used then tossed away.
Fake smiles and words just to win your trust,
not meaning what they say.

Fool me once, fool me twice, I am but a fool,
my heart soaked up the lies.
Your arrow pierced now drains me of life,
again love said its goodbyes.

No, hell may not be just fire and brimstone,
it can be agony and pain.
May be too many burdens upon our shoulders,
as we slowly go insane.

I always thought there was a Heaven on earth,
love beautiful and kind.
My search through life with its twists and turns,
only broken hearts to find.

God has a plan for each child he creates,
Lord what is mine to be.
Why so many mountains to keep climbing,
are set in front of me.


Author notes

I have told you all this so that you may have peace in me. Here on earth you will have many trials and sorrows. But take heart because I have overcome the world. John 16:33

The righteous face many troubles, but the Lord rescues them from each and every one. Psalm 34:19

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  • mrs. random silver member
    July 24

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    Wow...a very strong write Sandy! Sometimes, in life, we are so busy screaming our problems and questions to God, what we cannot hear him Whisper the answers. A very convicting write and ended in a good question. Well done my friend! You take care!

    Warmest,
    Mylee

    • Sandygram silver member
      July 24
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      Thank You Mylee

      Your comment was so nice to read. Glad you stopped by and read my poem. You take care and have a wonderful day. Hugs and smiles.

      Bless You,
      Sandy

  • Beret55 silver member
    July 21
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    A very good write Sandy. I just hope its not all true to your life.


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 21
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      Lovely Coment

      Well God doesn't give us more then we can bear. So far thats been true. Mountains are there to climb so you feel good when you finally reach the top. Though sometimes it feels like Mt Evereast Hope you had a great day my friend. Hugs and Smiles

      Bless You,
      Sandy
  • I literally have no words hun, just lots of hugs


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 16
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      Thank you Amanda. Your comments are always so thoughtful and caring. You always seem to know what I am feeling as I write.

      Bless You,
      sandy
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