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Withstanding the Heat

I am the water of us:
moved around to keep you dry and stable.
Naturally following your darkest caverns;
the occult roadways to your heart.
Lately,
you have been the sun;
distant and at times overbearing.
Evaporate me.
Encircle me.
Most of all reflect me.

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  • TheRoughDraft
    July 20, 2008

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    great metaphores here. I love the flexibile notion of the water exploring all regions naturally.
    The last three lines are raw and powerful, i like that in a poem, gives a sense of true desire.
    Great write, definitly worth the wait. Hopefully you'll manage to withstand the heat xx