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Otay You Asked For It

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I'm the gunslinger here in my wittle town,
I am the meanest hombre around.
I'm the 142nd fastest gun  in the west you see, 
and I'm out gunning for 143.
Now put em up partner for you stepped over the line,
and I have the quickness of a rattle snake and a quick eye.
Get those hands up and make fast with the crawl,
cause I'm the best in the west after all.
He spat his chew out and wiped at his little chin,
then they laughed and started all over again.

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Hope you enjoy my quickie it was fun to write

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    July 27, 2008

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    very nicely penned Great tale and fun to read good write Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest


  • dustookie2
    July 26, 2008

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    Well I am enjoying your quickie and LMAO.. Brilliant take on the prompt. Good luck in this contest. A pleasure to read out loud have read it a few times still smiling.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    July 14, 2008

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    Aww two brothers in my mind playing such wonderful games of Cowboys.
    And, those rattlers get everywhere
    Good luck in the contest hun
    Much love
    Julie xxx


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    July 14, 2008

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    Haha. I loved this one. It goes perfect with the prompt. I can remember the clothes and the western outfits. It is a shame that they are no longer politically correct.

    Great Job.

    Mike