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Cry The Tears I have Cried

I cried the tears you gave me
i turned my pillow wet at night

But you never cared,never bothered
You took the matter far too light

for days and months i cried
when people called me names,abused me
but you never let them know the truth
you never stood up for me

for years i never told you a word
never blamed you,never hated you
but deep within i was becoming strong

now i was forgetting you

suddenly you realize how wrong you were
trying to enter my life,a sudden attack
but baby i am not that girl now
i have moved on and there's no coming back

I cried the tears you gave me
i turned my pillow wet at night

Now its your turn,Don't you see
To Cry The Tears I have Cried

Author notes

this guy who never stood up for me when i was being insulted.....5 years now when i am so happy in life and have forgotton my past....he tells me i should forgive him......because he has realized he was wrong....but now i am a strong girl......and dont care....i used to be generous in forgiving.....but not anymore....


"banana split" (the contest holder wanted this word)


(OPTION : Write a poem to your ex)(this is for the other contest)


Option 2 Break up poems... I'm trying to be strong and not cry over him which has been going good so far... so only happy break up poems

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  • dreamersalwayslive
    July 27, 2008

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    Nice

    I can feel the hurt and anger coming out of the poem, and how you moved past that. It really made me feel what you were feeling. The only thing i would work on is the punctuation and making sure you space after you put the comma. Great write!


  • Missa
    July 17, 2008

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    uhm..sorry, you didn't put the quote in your authors notes... put it in by tomorrow or i'll be DQing you