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Roses are. . .

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Roses are God's signatures
of
Everlastig love...
Beauty and passion...
and
The greatest gift a woman treasures...
Sometimes even more than diamonds!
Of all its many colors and frangrances
I think the red red rose outshines the rest!
It's petals are wrapped tightly together
Forming a smybol and vow to some...
Like two lovers arms enterwined.
And when such love is felt
The rose will never fade...
but
Only grow more beautiful each day
And the thorns will become soft as velvet
When there is no hate between its lovers...

dragonheart1

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What treasures are you losing in Life by not livint it?

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  • Thank you so much for your entry. Your words are beautiful.This line here... 'Roses are God's signatures of Everlastig love...'Is simply wonderful.You have a beautiful voice and this is clearly heard within your written words.Such passion you have woven into your write.Although not all words were used from the word bank, but that doesn't really matter as you have written this from your heart, and to me,that is what counts the most!
    Many blessings to you sweet poet.
    Your AP friendly angel
    ~Angel of Whispers~


  • maralisa gold member
    July 14

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    wow beautiful words you have painted loved the following lines my friend you have captured pure beauty within your words
    Roses are God's signatures of Everlastig love...
    Beauty and passion...and The greatest gift a woman treasures...The rose will never fade...
    but Only grow more beautiful each day And the thorns will become soft as velvet When there is no hate between its lovers...good luck in the contest