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Envelope

envelope.
I want to be put in your envelope.
envelop me and send me away.
away to the ends of the world.
we will live until the end of the world.
exist not in body but in conciousness.
wrap me up in love,
with care,
a peach paper package, full of ideas and emotion,
all folded up into one human being.
but i need you to envelope me, and take me away.
two becomes one.
one plus one is two, and two plus love is one.
emotions so intense, recognizable, but so hard to comprehend.
i understand it all, but i am still at a loss.
i'm enveloped with all these feelings.
Happiness, a feeling now attained
i used to try and gain,
leaving me in pain.
I used to try to find it,
but it found me.
he found me.
we found eachother.
it was meant to be,
in its randomosity
like these words i write,
an ecstatic flight.
words.
dont even explain.
dont even come close.
but they are a starting point.
the starting point of my happiness.
words that we exchanged.
enveloped me with ideas,
with love.
developed in to love,
from a point. that was just words on a computer screen.


Author notes

well its like really late or early. im im not in stable mindstate. but sobriety, sanity, is over rated. mostly.

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  • My teeth pinch
    July 27, 2008

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    so much love!!!!!!!!! and its kinda twisted and great, a wonderful beginning and end good imagery too!!!!!!!! I once put 11 of my eyelashes into and envelope and mailed them to someone.


  • Suzyy
    July 18, 2008

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    Hmm

    I like this one because it lacks the hole, poems have to completely flow all the time thing. And yet it still explains you in a nut shell and how you feel.
    Idk maybe i'm just crazy.