its not only the pain that endouver
its also the ignorant people hurting her
with everyday,every moment i see her die
oh god!does she has 2 suffer.....i ask why?
if only people would merely understand
that shes my life,verily grand
everyday she loses her hope to live
forgets shes my support,and to me an elusive
and who will not after so much suffering
herself careless,but for others always caring
whenever they wanted,they used her
whenever she wanted,they refused her
shes smiles,but i know its surely fake
she laughs but only for my life sake
even not for yourself and not for anybody
its a bore.....MOM you gotta live just for me
promise if people continue giving hurt and sane
not you but i will feel its exetreme pain
still if you think you cant take it anymore
go away then.....i free you from my bore
die not everyday.......die once and for all
and behind you ,i shall also fall
away from life,below the earthly defy
and right beside you,i will also lie
Author notes
i wrote this one when i had seen people torturing and hurting my mom.......couldnt take it anymore.....couldnt see her this way......this is a very special poem for me since the last 4 lines are something that i was forced to write.....
A contest entry
- For Our Parents by WhiteAngelCake.
700 points, ended August 18, 2008, 28 entries
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Comments
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in the second stanza, i feel the use of quickhand '2' somewhat ruins the message
6th verse is particularly excellent.
the emotion, really comes through this poem. well done, wonderful poem.
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Wow... Um... This is great. Really sad... Thanks for entering my contest.
-WhiteAngelCake
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