You take my breath away.....
Like air itself you fill my heart
with sweet embrace, like helium.
Like air itself,
without you I would die.
While it is true you steal my breath by merely passing...
it's also true that
without you, I could breath
no more....
You are the breath within my lungs....
Author notes
Prompt: Without you I shall never breath again.
Dedicated to mine lover ^.^
A contest entry
- PIF - Prompt- 10 poets & 10 Lines by Cannonsfire.
800 points, ended July 14, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So, how do you like my soul??
Comments
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Beautiful!!! I love the emotion that flows from your words....
Thanks for sharing this,
Luck. -
im not really gonna comment hun im not in the mood to read lov poems more ready to die... but oh well love you,
kitty xxx -
Just beautiful it made me sigh
love, C
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