Inhaling summers sunset fills my existence,
as soft zephyr's of forever escape your lips.
I grasp onto eternity and my soul sighs in tune,
we are one as ocean's tides ebb and flow throughout time.
Hearts skip through shallow leaves,
in exhaled dance where unity is freedom.
Oh never again to inhale such beauty, nor hear sweet whispers,
where my soul ceases to resonate and the tides no longer sway.
I inhale these thoughts like daggers into my heart
and then there is nothing... for you are gone.
Author notes
Prompt: Without you I shall never breathe again
10 lines of beauty and what it means to you.
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF - Prompt- 10 poets & 10 Lines by Cannonsfire.
800 points, ended July 14, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
-
Such a sad ending to a beautifully soft piece of writing. I enjoyed the sentiments. Love, C
-
Beautifully telling; the softness of realising they are gone slowly creeps up on the reader and breaks the heart
Wonderful poem!
Best of luck
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
-
Ok.... you have penned 10 lines of beauty! Sad but lovely. Juls
Adding your comment:
