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Lies

As I sit here writing this to you,
my heart is slowly leaking out my eyes.
All that I've held near and dear,
slipping quickly from my grasp.

I thought I had lost you forever,
but then you came back into my life.
I was as happy as could be,
but that is all being taken from me.

All of my plans, hopes, and dreams,
are being slowly torn from me.
Been kicked to the curb many times before,
but never has it hurt like this.

I was so very happy you see,
to feel needed by a special man like you.
I feel so hopeless and want to give up,
no strength have I to carry on any longer.

I love you so much it hurts sometimes,
is what you told me mere hours ago.
Now I'm not so sure you even told the truth,
guess we were all just a bunch of lies.

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I wrote this on 7/14/08 at 2:45 am.

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  • aanika
    August 31, 2008

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    this is very sad, but beautiful.
    I think it's amazing that you can write something so painful in such pretty words.
    stay strong.

  • Xorlev
    July 14, 2008

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    I must agree, so sad. I know how you're thinking...and it always hurts so very much. Sad...yet beautiful.


  • Paulies Cracker
    July 14, 2008

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    This is so sad yet it's beautiful. I can honestly say I know what that's like. If you need to talk about ANYTHING, I'm here for you.


  • Moons Lunar Angel
    July 14, 2008

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    This is so sad. Despite that it is written wonderfully, displaying heart-wrenching emotion.
    Love hurts.
    Lil