Letting go of loves sweet kiss..
Oceans break upon silver dreams..
Hidden beauty in hearts bliss
Leave the world unseen...
Melodies of Eros song haunting
minds of loves gone wrong..
Giving hearts a bitter taste as
Soul mates turn and walk away..
Loving one and letting go,
is the hardest thing you'll ever know..
Did you never see the look in my eyes
every-time you sang to me?
Every-word sank in deep...
Words of beauty flowed from your lips
as my heart you did capture in sensual bliss.
But another did you so love and downed my happiness
With some rum... Roaming worlds of beauty and grace
Speaking languages of many a place..
On falling stars wishes are made
though knowing that none will
be granted on light of day.
Letting love go to send to the moon..
Singing of misery like me and you...
Traveling hearts wander the world
True love waits for calls to be heard..
Like a wolf in the night you did steal..
This heart of mine, this soul once real..
Wings of black mark my heart
showing one who shall not be loved..
Alone and broken this body is
and life is sinking in deserts sand..
Letting you go to worlds apart
though never leaving you truly
for you will always be in my heart..
showing the world the real meaning of beauty
as you sing your songs to your real soul's beloved..
May days bring light into this shattered heart of mine..
As my sails open I let my heart drift away..
Knowing it belongs to someone far across seas and land
But never willing to ruin someone else's
Love and heart..
Letting you go to live a life of
dreams and grace..
Be at peace, for you will be in my mind always..
Author notes
ok.. got to talking to a friend of mine and we said good bye.. For the last time, I think.. I wish it was different but it can't be any other way...And now my heart breaks..
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I truly loved this poem... each and every part I love Like a wolf in the night you did steal..
This heart of mine, this soul once real..
that was so perfectly written to me the way you wrote it,,, it made me feal the pain.. this soul once real.. wow.. amazing... I felt every word you said... beautiful piece... I love it...
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so much emotions seeping out through out this entire write. saying goodbye to some we care about & love hurts deep inside of our hearts. a deep ache is usually what is left behind.
you did an excellent job in expressing all of these emotions. sometimes what we want isn't always what we get huh?
this pain I know all to well my dear sissy. I'm here for you whenever you need me.
love you
kat
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I know this sentiment all too well. There's only so much you can go through before it's clear that 'goodbye' is the right choice. Lovely and heartfelt poem, dear. Best wishes.
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This is beautifuly sad, emotional babe, though love seems to wither and die, it is never realy gone, it lingers forever in the hearts of those who hold it dear.
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Awww hearts do heal but love never ends no matter how far the distance in life or death, I believe it comes full circle
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Amazing
after i read this,it pained me this so real to me,
This piece as tragic as it is was brillant,
Thank you for writing a piece of my heart!
Rend
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*hugs her* Heal and feel better soon.
A beautiful write, it oozes emotion. Despite your loss, you have been touched and your friend has been touched by you....saying goodbye will never take away the imprint of the love you shared. -
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Thank you very much for your kind comment.. It means a lot.. Love never ends, even if it moves on to another, there will always be the memories at least, that I can smile upon when I think back.. *hugs you* again thank you for the kind comment..
Angel
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This was the poem i was refering to when i read it a day ago......
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oh..I'm sorry it made you depressed..
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I am sorry for your pain...even as I see the beauty of your words, in form and melody, speaking such truths and in such ways that take my breath away...
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wow this is amazing, you have no idea how much i relate to this poem its simply amazing...i know who this is about, i love the poem its just amazing hun, ill always be here for you and i know ive not been here much lately ive been suffering myself...i love you
all my love,
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T.T wow.... didnt know your heart felt this way....
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sad but still a very good write im sorry about your freind and you having to say good bye but all in all sweetie things work out in the end good job with this one
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hmmm, i think i know who this is about but i dont know *confused..
*sigh*
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Loving one and letting go,is the hardest thing you'll ever know..Letting you go to live a life of dreams and grace..Be at peace, for you will be in my mind always wow this is so deep and sad hun I truly feel your broken heart within your poem
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A most touching sentiment is portrayed here, with deep soulful pining, just a few pointers though:
First of all, I'd run this through spell check again, and the ninth stanza would perhaps read a little better if it were as such:
"I set sail, to let my heart drift..
Knowing it belongs to someone faraway,
To never again ruin someone else's
Love and heart.."
Just a thought, well done dear.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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thank you..
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"...every time you sang to me?" - awwww
This is sad yet beautiful.
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You want I should beat the snot out of someone?
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It's ok.. my own fault I think.. can't seem to fight for what I want..
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Well perhaps if it was worth fighting for it would not have drifted away so easily on its own.
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But it didn't drift away on it's own.. I pushed it away.. My own fault..
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Your heart will mend hun. at least you got to say good-bye, sometimes we don't get that chance and are left to wonder for ever. Juls
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yes, but is it really the heart that heals? Or do we just delude ourselves?
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Rest assured hun, hearts do heal. For a time you feel it never will, but give it time. Once it is healed you will be able to move forward. Trust me. Juls
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A sad and beautiful heart's labour sis!
Nothing left to say other than.. I hope your heart heals!
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maybe one day...
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It will sweetheart... give yourself time
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Yeah.. and time is such a b***
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Yes it is! *kicks it*
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Somone should shoot it.. Kill it.. blow it up! lol.. my bad.. just angry and annoyed.. You know if anyone is have a dark/sad contest going on?
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on it!! lol
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Lol.. cute..
No it's ok sis.. thanks
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Reminds me of the old saying, 'set if free, if it was yours it will return to you of its own free will'z hun. C
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Yes.. But this time it will not return I don't think..
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pretty so far
i love you
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