without you, my pen etches
un-seen words -
reflections of life’s breath
in your nearness,
that ripples through me,
depth
in your voice,
that flows strength,
feeling
in your name,
that alights love,
soul
in all I am,
sensations of you,
breath
Author notes
It may not be the best poem, but my wife, Amor, is breath.
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF - Prompt- 10 poets & 10 Lines by Cannonsfire.
800 points, ended July 14, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ah yes! That she is ...
and in her healing of others, she is also the channel through which God let flow the Living Water.
Congratulations on a wondrous Gold. My regards to your family: may you experience the Joy and Peace of this Festive Season.
Love
Myra
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Thanks for the blessings.
Also, thank you for stopping over. Frans
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Congratulations on the gold. What more can love offer than the very breath of life? Seems you know quite well what a breath of fresh air is.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Cannonsfire
Thank you for the gold. I appreciate this. Also a thanks to all that gave wonderful encouraging comments. Frans -
This is really one of those poems
one would wish from her lover, You have described the love for her in such a beautiful way. I am sure this has touched her.
Dolores xx
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It soft, gentle. It glows love!
And it IS one of your best.
Just a few words, but so much meaning.
Wonderful!!
Aesthete
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Beautiful! Think this speaks of such deep love!
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Wow...Amor is very lucky to have a guy like you..
I think it's beautiful...
XXJeannette
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I think this is exquisite! Love, C
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