Unfathomable,
my existence empty of you…
Each night before sleep, I pray with one request
“Please Lord each morning, let me wake
cradling in my hands, his sweet loving face”
There’s love and then there’s finding
your reason to live
…that feeling deep within, without him,
you would struggle
truly, to even breathe.
Author notes
Prompt: Without you I shall never breathe again
10 lines of beauty and what it means to you.
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF - Prompt- 10 poets & 10 Lines by Cannonsfire.
800 points, ended July 14, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a beautiful piece... And it instills such a longing in me to find a new love, and re-experience that feeling again!!! Thank-you!!!
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Oh wow! This is just beautiful! An amazing take on the prompt here, deeply heart-felt and pure in its sincerity. Wonderfully spoken piece of love and adoration!!!
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Thank you
..any words of love are a joy for me to write
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Real romantic.
Hello Cindy...a lovely poem indeed.
Rahbar.
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Ah, this is sweet, so profound, like a heartfelt prayer offered; well done dear, and all the best in the contest.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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Such beautiful words my light! A true expression of beauty, superbly penned, good luck from your dark shadow
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Hehe Thanks darl
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what a sweet poem dear sister, you love him like your own with passion...sensual and gratifying
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Absolutely gorgeous sis! Speechless!
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this is reall beautiful sissy
i love you -
'too' - 'to'...This is sensual, aching and beautifully done. Loved it. C
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oh god how did i miss that lol..tired today, but thanks, is changed hehe
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Bravo!! you did a wonderful job sissy.. I really love the emotion in this.. It's just really intense for being a short poem!
I really loved it.. You did a wonderful job.. I wish you the best of luck!!!
Angel
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aw thanks Sis, my man always inspires such words of love
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WHAT A LOVING POEM!!!
I enjoyed it really..all the lines are wonderful.
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