Mind
always
in a daze
replete with haze
No respite in sight
no sunlight, no delight
Will it ever again clear
Isn't very likely I fear
But won't give up, real hard I'll try
Until once more I'm a clear thinking guy
A contest entry
- PiF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
700 points, ended July 16, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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A nice attempt at an etheree. It's sentiments are expressed clearly within. Thank you for entering one of my favorite forms into my contest.
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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who stole the poem??
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