Jesus
My thoughts are in Jesus
As he is the creator of heaven and earth
But I stand troubled for there are some that are lost
I believe that only through him we can find peace
Our nation is in a bind
Confused ,separated
Never to be the same
Beaten down for we feel like there's no way out
Scared of the out come, for what’s to come
Soon he will be with us
And give us peace
Till that day we must stand united
And praise our lord Jesus
A contest entry
- Quantum Thoughts #2: Connectivity by islekine.
600 points, ended July 23, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show your love for Jesus by Shining for You.
700 points, ended August 4, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Spiritual Battle by Gods Lil Warrior.
330 points, ended September 24, 2008, 34 entries
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What did you think
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This is a great poem.
Keep up the great writing.
Thanks for entering my contest.
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np good luck what the jugement and thanx for the comment
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well done
Yes I agree we must stand together united and praise him and wonderful things will happen in his name.A lovely poem good luck in the contest -
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thanx
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Thanks so much for entering!
Another wonderful entry....to a great contest!! Best wishes always!
Write on!
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Deep, heartfelt wording - and so true for so many. Their faith is what they live for.
Line 9 - I think is a typo; I think you want the word "feel" (not 'fell').
lovely entry
best wishes in the contest.
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aww thanx so much i apreceate the comment
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