Do you write earnestly or write in rhyme?
O yes, I write it both ways on a dime
but when I want to flummox those who know
the dif.fer.ence to free verse I must go.
A contest entry
- Do You Write Serious Poetry or the Kind that Rhymes? (Contest) by Peripatetic.
1400 points, ended July 29, 2008, 27 entries
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OK, I'm flummoxed.
The last 2 lines seem a Mobius strip. In following the surface dimension of the statement I suddenly find myself at a point on the reverse plane from which I started. Continuing on I find myself exactly where I started, unsure of where I've been.
It's a fun carnival ride of logic, but does it go anywhere?
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