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Moonrise before mourning

Moonlight haunting the garden
Beneath the child's lair
Baby sleeping in ornate crib
A scratching upon the stair

Monsters at the door


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  • neoladyem
    September 27, 2008

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    The title is very creative and grabs the readers attention to read this poem. It maybe short but it really does wonders for the imagination.


  • daviscth silver member
    September 4, 2008

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    You have so much imagery in these few lines and I really like your choice of title as well. thanks so much for sharing with me.


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    July 28, 2008

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    wow this is dark and babies so precious i hate when they have bad dreams i like this you did a very great job with this good luck in the contest