Moonlight haunting the garden
Beneath the child's lair
Baby sleeping in ornate crib
A scratching upon the stair
Monsters at the door
Author notes
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A contest entry
- 22 Words by Mrs LadyEnthralling.
700 points, ended July 28, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - #132 Celebrating 50 Gold's by daviscth.
450 points, ended September 9, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Respect is asked for, given and understood... :)
Comments
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The title is very creative and grabs the readers attention to read this poem. It maybe short but it really does wonders for the imagination.
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You have so much imagery in these few lines and I really like your choice of title as well. thanks so much for sharing with me.
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wow this is dark and babies so precious i hate when they have bad dreams i like this you did a very great job with this good luck in the contest



